Tear Tells A Tale Comments

A thought provoking poem! Extremely well written.......5 stars

It is a sad story that not only touches you but also touches the all readers. Your inscription on abducted girl is so touching and moving. Beautiful poem.

beautiful sad, oh sadness is beautiful. worries can be marketed. and that one girl, one girl out of countless same... that tear, that wait, that story also live, and game be played.

beautiful sad, oh sadn

Thanks a million times for this insightful piece on the plight of the abducted girls. Always remain blessed.

this could be girls that BK has taken away in middle of the night...poor girls whole world didn't do much

Of her parents and siblings Keeping the fire of hope kindling Awaits for the day.... It's so very sad! Thanks for sharing, Bharati Nayak!

The world today is full of hatred and war! Nice work.

We wish too the story should have a happy ending. It hurts when small girls are tortured and kept in inhuman condition and exploited. An eye opener. Thanks.

Keeping the fire of hope kindling Tear awaits some angels.......... hope awaits at door of Angel heart when stifles being parted with...very poignant write, yet heart breaking story, thanks for sharing

Thank you all dear poets for your touching comments.The story may be true.It may not be life story of the one who penned it.But it is true story of thousands or lakhs of such poor girls who get lost..They lose their parents, home, siblings and all address for contact.Their story never come out All their identity is lost in some darkness.The day I read a poem by one unknown poet I felt like crying.This poem I wrote on the verge of moment.

Is it a true story? ? I feel the emotions in this... A lot... I hope things will be brighter n better soon

lovely poem, a mood of sadness pervades throughout the whole poem, well penned poem, thanks for shairng

Every teardrop that is shed and the ones that remain buried inside has a story to tell... You captured the tragedy of a little girl trapped in a dungeon very aptly without taking a melodramatic vein or going preachy either... I respect this poem Bharti.. This is one of the best poems of yours that I have read... Wonderful work.. Thank you for sharing..