Wednesday, April 20, 2011

Tear Less Eye Comments

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when i cried a lot,
& pleaded to hurt me not,
even then my life is shattered,
my dreams are scattered.
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Arfa Iris
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Harindhar Reddy 22 October 2011

Hello! hello! Fellow poetess! You poem seems to embodiment the saying short is sweet. when i cried a lot, & pleaded to hurt me not, even then my life is shattered, my dreams are scattered. It is fantabulous start to the poem. I wonder how you could put so much matter in so few words. Well! This show the craft of the poetess and The clarity of the poem.2 Hands up one for the poetess and another for the poem. Two thumps went one for the poem and another for the poetess for writing her TESS of D'urbervilles!

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