Wednesday, October 3, 2007

Tear Filled Sea Comments

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standing all alone surrounded by faces
no one notices me
eyes down at my laces
my tears fill the sea
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Logan Glover
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simple and to the point. i love it. great write.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 03 October 2007

yet spilt with just enough subtlety for effect. love it, logan. keep on.

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