Tuesday, April 8, 2014

Tear Drops..... Comments

Rating: 4.8

One by one
Weeping
They fall.
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Lyn Paul
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Amitava Sur 26 April 2014

A nice poem in deed. Our life may pass through diff stage, but tear drops do support in most of the stages, irrespective of joy, pain or sorrow, tear drops will follow you....... very nice

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 April 2014

A beautiful write from your pen. Concluding lines adds beauty to it. The teardrops just needed, Just needed to fall.... Very true said tears dont know why they fall, but they wash away the pain of aching heart too. One really feel light after that..

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Khairul Ahsan 12 April 2014

This is a well written poem. The note is complementary to the title. 'The teardrops just needed, Just needed to fall' - Two beautiful lines at the end of the poem, like two teardrops. Fantastic! Agree with Valsa George, that teardrops are cathartic, purges our mind and relieves us of our inner heart aches.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 11 April 2014

Heartache falls Into the rain Of tears. They must drop. Beautifully presented in the poem with nice lyrics. Thank you.

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Valerie Dohren 10 April 2014

Another lovely write from your pen Lyn - those teardrops are always with me of late, so I can relate.

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Valsa George 09 April 2014

Tear drops have cathartic effect.... Let them purge our mind of its inner aches ! A very powerful write!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 09 April 2014

they just needed to fall...an absolute beauty!

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