Thursday, September 11, 2008

Tear-Drop Comments

Rating: 5.0

Moments come and go,
Leaving their footprints upon my path.
The ambience that surrounds
Completes me.
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Sarvesh Kulkarni
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Little Morning Star 04 January 2009

tears, something that express our feeling, which is sad or glad.. well penned..

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Anjali Sinha 28 November 2008

wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! dropp a tear I cry +++++10 regards anjali

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Sathyanarayana M V S 14 November 2008

A tear dropp u want to hide it; but it reveals u! ! ! ! Wow! Terrific piece..........great poem..................10++++++++++++++++++++

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Pooja Ladyluck 10 October 2008

gr8 thought! ! ! amazingly portrayed.......

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Rakhi Jayashankar 29 September 2008

each tear dropp has its own power to reliev the pain to maeke us feel goood n lt mre

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Koyel Mitra 16 September 2008

Excellent poem.You are quite talented.

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, aryaindia 12 September 2008

Your ability to grasp the depth of a situation seems to be marvellous at your age and I am analysing whether it could be due to varied experiences of sorrow that have surfaced in your 18 years that make you think so deeply. With you, blessings, arya.

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Indira Babbellapati 12 September 2008

well, wht do i say about one who writes with such deep thought at this age...!

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Ric Bastasa 12 September 2008

very revealing of the poetic in you.. nice work

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Kesav Easwaran 11 September 2008

good revealing poem drops...keep posting poems, Sarvesh...ten for your impressive show up write...

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C T Heart 11 September 2008

just human to fell and experience such...fine lines...keep on writing.

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Tanya Stanford 11 September 2008

Short and beautiful.

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