Tear Comments

Short but specific.. Tear is, , , yeah, tear.. Beautiful..

A few lines are all that is needed, if the reader needs it... Andrew 10

fell on earthly bed and rose with salty tides great lines. this poem gives the reader such a clear image and we have all cried this is writen with a pen of a poet... good job. Becca

Fantastic few lines :) great poem

Wah Asif Bhai... Wah... Simply beautiful... I totally agree with Sandra... Really a memorable work of art and it never comes without tears in your eyes... Beautiful indeed...

It often takes tears to create a work of art that is memorable. Lovely write. Warm regards, Sandra

nice and lovely. it is one of my favourite subjects.

Truth can be found in many things as you avow. Your last lines leave a lot to think about, which is the kind of poem that is more intriguing to read.

I totally agree with you. We truly understand how much we love when we lose or miss our lover a lot. If poems were flowers, this one would definitely be a red rose.10/10.

Wow, cool description! Feeling when we dropp tears, , I love it!

phenomenal my english so bad but is very very very very good

carrying the burdens of sorrow and pain they fall to death delivering us to life! I just loved the write.....its exceptionally well emphasised!