Tuesday, July 5, 2005

Teacher's Pets Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once upon a time a teacher,
partial to most any creature,
had retired to his bed.
Slept as if he had been dead.
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Allan James Saywell 07 July 2005

it's seem as though your poems are getting longer herbert and the style is similar to the old Australian poets quite a good yarn but then you do like to write long poems dont you where i look at every means to make mine shorter Warm regards allan been away for four days in a lovely place called Ballina on the north coast of Australia

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Linda Preston 05 July 2005

That's quite an epic tale. Amusing too

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Uriah Hamilton 05 July 2005

What a funny story but I want to sleep less soundly now!

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 05 July 2005

You nevr know what can happen in the middle of the night...good read!

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