teach my kids wrong from right,
teach them in darkness there still could be light.
don't give up on your hopes and dreams,
together you and i are a team.
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This is well structured and presented. It has an internal rhythm that I like. I like this piece very much. Very well done. GW62
every parents wish for their children.......if you have children jose they will be very successful......this is so true which is why a 10 goes to you
Easier said than done. If this were that easy our world would never be in the mess it's in now. Ten!
It's a wonderful advice 4 all parents.. Excellent thought... icely writin...
Love your kids, no matter what happens, for they are the future of this world and if through your love they can make even that small bit of difference to it, then it's all for the better. Loved it!
It's a wonderful advice 4 all parents.. Excellent thought... Nicely writin...
very nice Jose. Makes me want to grab my son and just hug him.
Yah! everbody wish our kids to be what we want to be....Its always a dream for parent to have life what we wanted for them....you poem enlighten our dear parents to guide our young ones to the path of rightiousness....very nice poem recommended to be put in all library in our country..God bless my fiend and Thank you.