Sunday, January 26, 2014

Teach Me How To Paint Comments

Rating: 5.0

You walked by side and you came to my mind
And then I saw at you, there’s a love behind
You smiled and looked at me, then you passed away
And from my heart, there are words for you to say
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Mac Adrone Adonay
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Eldin Van Der Walt 26 January 2014

I love the way you express yourself in this poem, your word play is excellent and deep from the heart. Well written! (10! !) Eldin

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