Teach Me Comments

Lovely poem trying to keep love and sweetness of life alive in the middle of strife and discord going on all around. a prayer of the poet with all the softness. Thanks for sharing.

Loved it! Great concept, creative imagery, well amount of repetition. One thing I would have changed is that the imagery seems a bit all over the place. The metaphors could have flowed together a bit better. Overall, a great poem! 9/10