Friday, October 26, 2012

Teach Me Comments

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Spaces and spaces
All around
All so quiet, so much silent
And a little solitary heart,
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Jaya Mishra
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Heather Wilkins 11 December 2013

a well written poem teach me someone how to lie to myself

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Prasetya Utama 29 January 2013

Nice poem, to open our eye of heart for true life

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Sahil Sood 28 November 2012

a very nice poem.. luvd the way you ended it.. beautifully written..

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Heyyou Boy 06 November 2012

Interesting write. The truth cant be budged. Spoken like a poet. Well done Jaya! ! !

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Saroj Kanta Maharana 04 November 2012

every thing comes at a cost n success too is no exception. but to be left out by the dear ones.. too costly it seems. but life balances. dear jaya nice one..

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Asif Andalib 04 November 2012

Fabulous. The last two lines are my favorite Teach me someone! How to lie to myself?

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great expressions, i really enjoyed all the lines especially the second last paragraph, wonderfully. The_African_Son

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Indranil Bhaduri 02 November 2012

Self realisation moulded in lovely poetic expressions.. Great write

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