Tuesday, November 23, 2010

Teach Me. Comments

Rating: 4.5

teach me how to listen
by listening to me
show me brand new things
things I would never see
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Rebekah Rogers
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Kevin Carney 26 December 2010

This is so heartfelt and nicely written. I love the way you use the word teach to narrate your poem. We hall fall but, need the courage to step up and go forward. Great write 10+

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