Sunday, April 10, 2016

Tea With Carroll Comments

Rating: 5.0

In my mind at that hour it all made sense
All three halves were present in past tense
One to represent the wee hour of the night
The other in a larger moment was just right
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Edmund Strolis
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Clarence Prince 14 April 2016

Tow ears were more than plentiful to hear Two eyes side by side, is what I recommend How clear they see may just as well depend.... Lovely and very funny, as well! Thanks for sharing, Edmund, blessings to you!

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Nosheen Irfan 11 April 2016

Reality is often ambiguous. But sometimes truth strikes you at odd hours. That's when your verse has most rhythm and rhyme. Life is really complicated. It takes a lot of wisdom to figure it out. Still there's always a shadow of a doubt. No reality is totally revealed. A thoughtful write.

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Nosheen Irfan 11 April 2016

From the graphic I get that we can see the boat on water surface but can't see the fish underneath. So reality has layers and we can't really see all of it.

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