Darling, darling, darling.....
He desires her,
when desire fills his eyes,
his lips cannot help but utter sweetness,
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Liked your Tea metaphor. And the analogy between Lips and Tea. Life, though sweet, at times becomes unbearably hot to taste. Beautiful piece
Yeah very true, humans have that power to think, imagine and perform else all will be animals.
Desire is well depicted in this wonderful poem. A very keen observation on a human being's behavior. Well crafted.
2) the concluding line is marvellous, dear poet
Good sordid commentary on human nature. Loved it
I liked the way you wrote this poem, apart from biological needs we humans have emotional requirements as well.
Excellent summary. Thanks for sharing.