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I now see your response about Chess shire from 2 YEAR ago. There must be a way to change it.

Try Cheshire. Are the rabbits in lines 5 and 16 the same rabbit? If the second rabbit refers to the hare, you could end poem with: ....where the hare may hide. Where/hare rhyme AND hare/hide alliteration! Nice one, CP. bri :) I SEE I LEFT A COMMENT EARLIER!

Sorry about all the mistakes here. I was hanging around some of my friends and I was about to fall out of my computer chair laughing. I didn't have time to read over it. And Chess shire was an auto correct

why did you use “Chess shire face” instead of “Cheshire face”? this is my favorite stanza: “You'll be greeted with a Chess shire face when you enter this wacky place. You don't have to go on a long ride. Just fall down the hole where the rabbit may hide.” the third line of the poem seems a bit long to read, compared to the others. not bad! bri :) thanks for sharing.