Sunday, June 28, 2009

Tea Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

Can you imagine
my tease so nice,
sweet with sugar
full of spice.
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Adrian Cox
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WoW, , I LOVE IT filled by sweet wonderful sincere thoughts which dance through these musical verses...

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Luwi Habte 11 September 2009

Adi, I love this one I think it has some memory or some thing else so nice poem luwi

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Angelic Warrior 09 July 2009

was this supposed to sound dirty? .....cuz if not it does.......a funny little piece if not for that one aspect.....lol

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Great imagery here Adrian all in rhyme and bouncy rhythm. She seems as though she is totally and utterly delicious or was as you did eat her. Loved it! 10 Karin Anderson

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Adrian Cox

Adrian Cox

Lincoln England
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