Tuesday, September 24, 2013

Tea On Tuesday Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I give you tea on Tuesday
Will you stay a little longer
Sit besides me, near the fountain
On the worn wooden bench
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Susan Lacovara
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Anthony Burkett 03 February 2014

A delightful pen… such simplicity... such sensuality... direct and to the point in expressing the desire in its lines... yet robed in a genuinely felt innocence... lovely!

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Danny Draper 28 October 2013

So sweet this entreat with enticing conceit, to have a lover entangled in sheets. Love it. :)

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 17 October 2013

a yearning so subtle yet deeply touching! great write, Susan.

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Susan Lacovara

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