Friday, September 30, 2011

Tea In Wonderland Comments

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'Down an ecstatic line of light'
senses somersault, tumble together
enfold and entity
entirely new.
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William F Dougherty 10 July 2012

This draft slips into periphrasis at times, which the poet is doubtless working on: repetitions of the mundane and of waking up, easily compacted.

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