Saturday, October 1, 2022

Tea In The Sahara (Aft. The Police) Comments

Rating: 4.9

The rose inflamed with fragnance
Has made me cry
For my memories are working
In overtime with every sniff
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Beautifully, emotionally charged, poignant.. love lost leaves such a vacuum in the heart…

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Sandra Feldman 06 October 2022

Beautifully and so sadly inspired. A love betrayed is the most painful, even once expired. An forgettable, excellent piece!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 06 October 2022

This is wonderful, LeeAnn! I really enjoyed the imagery, such as 'The rose inflamed with fragrance has made me cry, ' and 'Waiting in the desert with cups of sand to serve you.' 5 stars.

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Rebecca Navarre 04 October 2022

Ever so heart moving! .. And powerfully expressed! .. Straight to the heart! .. Beyond #ing! ..+++++++++++++++++++

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Kevin Patrick 04 October 2022

This stings the heart! sorry had to go there! . I really love the imagery you invoke, its evocative, and embracing. I wish I could write like this. Great tribute to a great musician

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Anjandev Roy 02 October 2022

This is definitely a remarkable piece....thank u, dear poetess...

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Indira Renganathan 02 October 2022

'cups of sand To serve you' is the highlight...interesting write

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 October 2022

Heartfelt write. Waiting in the desert with cups of sand to serve- great imagery. Thanks for sharing.

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Richard Wlodarski 01 October 2022

LeeAnn, I think that Sting would really appreciate your wonderful poem and kind gesture. I saw him together with Annie Lennox. What a great concert!

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Maria Mitea 01 October 2022

Great One, that really transmits the sentiment and that cup of sand!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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