Monday, April 28, 2014

Tattoo (Haiku) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shade and carve with INK
Roses of PROSE; Odds of ODE
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Captain Herbert Poetry
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 28 May 2015

Interesting Haiku in 5/7/6 syllable arrangement about poetry. I found Haiku is defined as a Japanese poem of 5/7/5 syllable format on topics about nature, mostly using adjectives and a caesaura (pause) in the middle before the last line. This one is a unique form and an innovation from traditional Haiku. It's a cross between a Senryu (Haiku about human foibles) and a Haiku.

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Helena Zen 06 May 2014

Expressions are infinite and boundless Great poem

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Ken E Hall 05 May 2014

you've tattooed the poem into the brain well done indeed...regards and thanks

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Vilma Gomez 04 May 2014

Poems are like tattoos that carve in the innermost heart

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Princess Sison 01 May 2014

Wonderful poem. Short but meaningful

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Bernadette Fernandez 29 April 2014

Poems will last long until death like tattoo. Beautiful poem

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Bernadette Fernandez 29 April 2014

Highly meaningful and lifting the Poetry world. Great poem and Great poet

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Colleen Courtney 28 April 2014

Yes they are! Poems and tattoos! Love them both! Great haiku!

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