Saturday, January 3, 2009

Tattered Love Note Comments

Rating: 5.0

Placed deep in my front pocket;
Lays a sercet of unknown strength.
Written so carefully by a trembling hand;
Dotted with tears no one sees fall.
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Cory Jensen
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Pink Butterfly ... 17 January 2009

Wonderfully written piece! ! ! Nice job!

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Kiran Raza 13 January 2009

this poem is amazing to! ! ! its very creative and the use of words is perfect. you had grabbed my attention just bye the title! ! ! it has so much meaning to it and i can picture evything going on! ! . keep it up! ! !

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Jacob Courtney 11 January 2009

absolutly beautiful....very good..i give this a 10...i love it

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angel unknown 03 January 2009

well written. and very true. this deserves a 10+.

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pied piper 03 January 2009

I liked this piece. Truly brilliant. Breakups are always hard. Well penned. Worthy of another 10.......

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