Placed deep in my front pocket;
Lays a sercet of unknown strength.
Written so carefully by a trembling hand;
Dotted with tears no one sees fall.
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this poem is amazing to! ! ! its very creative and the use of words is perfect. you had grabbed my attention just bye the title! ! ! it has so much meaning to it and i can picture evything going on! ! . keep it up! ! !
absolutly beautiful....very good..i give this a 10...i love it
I liked this piece. Truly brilliant. Breakups are always hard. Well penned. Worthy of another 10.......
Wonderfully written piece! ! ! Nice job!