Tuesday, March 10, 2015

Tasty Sounds Whispered Comments

Rating: 5.0

the sugary bliss
that springs forth
from your mouth
has a freedom flavor
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Chuy Amante
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Adeline Foster 11 June 2015

Interesting format. Enjoyed this poem. Read mine - Who Am I - Adeline

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Amitava Sur 21 March 2015

Does it mean that Any wish whether a bliss or love cannot be accepted or felt if it is not received wholeheartedly, ie, through all senses of body and mind? ? If it is then it's very true.

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* Sunprincess * 11 March 2015

.......nice ink! ! ! ....a poem with sweet taste and sound...keep penning ★

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