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Peeled sugar cane tastes sweet upon the lips.
Coconut milk tastes sweet on the tongue.
Your love tastes sweet in my life.
Easing burdens and taking away strife.
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Lamar Cole
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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 March 2018

Dear Lamar, it is really a romantic love poem with metaphor having haunting expression. You have amazingly brought the beginning with the lines....... Peeled sugar cane tastes sweet upon the lips. Coconut milk tastes sweet on the tongue. Your love tastes sweet in my life. Fantastic. Thank u.10

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