Sunday, June 24, 2007

Taste This Joy Comments

Rating: 5.0

Can you feel my heart
Beating hard within my chest
Can you feel me tremble
As you touch me tenderly
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Alison Smith
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David Harris 01 July 2007

Alison, romantic and sensual, something you do really well. Like this poem allot. Top marks my friend and thanks for sharing it. David

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Lillian J. 25 June 2007

Romantic and sensual, like it much! Lilly :)

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Inveterating intimations in play here, my dear...Tsk, tsk, tsk! LOL! Very Nicely Done, Alison... FjR

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Marci Made 24 June 2007

Well.all I can say is that you're all set and ready for a delightful time...Might I add I'm jealous but I love all that is so succinctly said and implied within....another winner from a great 'down under' gal.! ! ! marci.xo

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Alison Smith

Alison Smith

Orange, New South Wales, Australia
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