Thursday, June 11, 2015

Taste Of Waiting Comments

Rating: 4.5

Time and again I look towards the door
Your foot have sound to touch my heart
In your absence I love to consider, explore
Why love carries sad part and depart
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan
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Shahzia Batool 12 June 2015

This is the way of looking at the things that matters, as you did not mention the pain of waiting but the taste is the key-word, the blend of both in fact... The flow of rhymes is natural and effortless..a well-composed good poem!

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Abbottabad Pakistan
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