Saturday, February 7, 2009

Taste Of Sweets Comments

Rating: 5.0

she dissolved golden rays
of long spikes of the wheat hair
and with the eye being on fire
tumbled down into his reflecting shoulders
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Maria Barbara Korynt
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Eyan Desir 17 March 2009

liked your flow in this poem

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Dagmara Anna 02 March 2009

Interestingly and artistically written.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 07 February 2009

wonderful and simple!

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