Wednesday, March 2, 2016

Taste A Victory Comments

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R-ise of the sun begins,
U-sing its light by dawn;
T-wilight has disappeared,
H-aze is already gone.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Kathy Van Kurin 14 October 2016

Bernard F. Asuncion, I must say this poem was a learning tool and advice for life. Nice touch adding initials of family or friends, really gives this poem a lovely personal touch. Very creative. Thank you for the inspiration. Blessings.................................Kathy

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 October 2016

Thanks, Kathy, for leaving comments to my poems... I'll visit your poetry one day.....

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