Thursday, March 26, 2009

Taste Comments

Rating: 5.0

You devoured me
Your teeth sinking in, sharp
Like needles
Ripping my flesh
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Joan Hart
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Carl Harris 26 March 2009

Wow! There is a surreal quality about this poem that makes it very appealing, Caroline. There also seems to be a lot of anger in this write as well, overtones all through it, as if you are writing about a failed realationship with someone who did not meet your expectations or who perhaps used you to satisfy their own greedy desires. But it is the quality of the write that in the end makes it an exceptionally good and memorable one. You are a very gifted poet. Carl.

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