Wednesday, May 7, 2008

Taring Me Down Comments

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You laugh and criticize me
You build me up to tare me down
You were nice but now so mean
You made me cry in front of people
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Vanessa Svaleson
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Mandi Ducroq 07 May 2008

How sad for you angel. I totally understand this poem (unfortunately) . You will get through this, I have, and you will be stronger and love again. Right now you don't want to, and even you did, it seems unlikely, the pain is all consuming, but you will. Hang in there. This is a beautiful, raw poem, I can feel the pain...

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Vanessa Svaleson

Vanessa Svaleson

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