Target Comments

Wow! ... such a powerful poem! The flow, rhythm and rhyme, make the words dance upon the page! I love this couplet poem!

Like this Some I understand This seems to be one Very good poetry

Many targets are subliminal, aimed at with subconscious or societally mandated weapons. But first target must be noble, for the benefit of fellow men

Profound indeed, The poet has depicted the targets of the various persons and creatures, and at the end portrayes the true, virtuous target of humans. A lovely poem indeed, Loved reading it, Added to my poem list..........10

And what is the target in your mind? Is it peace, noble, sacrifice or kind? ..................great target great message great poem...............10

Yes, we all have different targets in our life. but the ultimate target of each man should be achieving the crown of being a real human being by spreading peace and kindness for others. great write with a philosophical ending. liked it so much. thank you.

What ever each one aims at, real target is one's own satisfaction, at the expense of anything under the sun, may be. Inspiring poem. Thanks for sharing.

Everybody aims for his or her target as a matter of daily routine and practice. But the ultimate aim for all human activity is to attain peace in life as you have rightly pointed out: Divine family targets peace by pray.

God, salvation, Christian inspiration - my targets!