Friday, March 7, 2014

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There’s this girl who left a boy a scar
Times have flown years gone far
One small cut how it didn’t heal
In a corner of mind the story lives still.
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Lyn Paul 07 March 2014

Thank you Pradip you have so much to give and Valsa certainly was thinking the same as I. Your life experiences give so much. Thank you

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Valsa George 07 March 2014

Tit for tat.... It all started as an idle fun.... but ended up in hurting the other one's feeling! Unfortunately the scar remains as a sad reminder...... Were you that boy, Pradip? Interesting anecdote from life, poetically recollected! !

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