Tuesday, July 12, 2016

Tardy (Haiku) Comments

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slowly but surely
this snail makes its way~~
late for the first date
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Govind Ramakrishnan
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Stephen Park 12 July 2016

Great stuff Govind. The variety you present is stunningly refreshing.

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Guru Kothandaraman 12 July 2016

Hope you were not late for your date, Magical haiku.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 12 July 2016

Philosophical theme, well presented using a few words and a well thought simile. Great stuff GR. Thanks for sharing.

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Gil Highlander 12 July 2016

funny and very smart poem. loved the title.

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