Tardy (Haiku) Poem by Govind Ramakrishnan

Tardy (Haiku)



slowly but surely
this snail makes its way~~
late for the first date

© 2016

Tuesday, July 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: fun
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
5-5-5 Haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stephen Park 12 July 2016

Great stuff Govind. The variety you present is stunningly refreshing.

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Guru Kothandaraman 12 July 2016

Hope you were not late for your date, Magical haiku.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 12 July 2016

Philosophical theme, well presented using a few words and a well thought simile. Great stuff GR. Thanks for sharing.

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Gil Highlander 12 July 2016

funny and very smart poem. loved the title.

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