Friday, May 8, 2009

' ' ' ' ' Tarab(Poem For Onelia On The Celebration Of The Day Of Her Birth) Comments

Rating: 2.8

The words
come to me

demanding to be
...
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Dónall Dempsey
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Onelia Avelar 19 May 2009

Of course, I came back to read 'my poem' and to find new aspects of it :)

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Original Unknown Girl 11 May 2009

What a gorgeously creative piece! Oh to be in your head for a day, those words are very lucky to have you fashion them into a poem as pretty as this. HG: -) xx

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Onelia Avelar 08 May 2009

: D: D Wow, I do not know about me getting one year older yesterday, but I feel how my EGO is growing up and growing up higher and higher :) I am in the sky, can you see me - the small point behind the clouds :) What of a lovely poem, I cannot believe you devoted such a gem to me. Do I deserve it :) Thank you so much! Allow me an important remark only: I am not a better poet, OF COURSE NOT! With love, onelia

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Dónall Dempsey

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Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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