Saturday, August 9, 2008

Tara's Daisies Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was a silly dream, needless to say.
You died of a small bone stuck in your throat,
all courtesy of a gray snapper, caught offshore.
You were too young, of course and I had plans
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Kris Smith 09 August 2008

H thatwas a very nice write enjoyed it thankyou Chris

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In the context of your forum message, of course. Sweetheart.... I'll concede that at the moment it doesn't take much to bring tears to my eyes, but you sure succeeded.... in the best possible way. You won't be needing a watering can for a while. :) t xx

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