Wednesday, August 31, 2005

Taps Comments

Rating: 5.0

Taps are being played
In the middle of me
To say good-bye
To that part that
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Charlotte Ballard
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Kelly Allen Vinal 31 August 2005

Somber and perfect! Wow.

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sheila knowles 31 August 2005

I like the way this poem spills down the page in quiet desperation. Strong imagery flashes and the ending is very real and very effective. Nice write.

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Sallie Howson 31 August 2005

excellent heart felt poem

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Charlotte Ballard

Charlotte Ballard

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