Sunday, October 21, 2018

Tapioca Pudding Comments

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As he got older, it became harder to maintain his footing.
He became soft as tapioca pudding.
It became harder to keep his balance.
Sometimes taking long walks became a challenge.
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Lamar Cole
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Rini Shibu 21 October 2018

Very touching poem about old people

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 October 2018

When he fell to the ground, it was hard to get up. He sometimes felt helpless like a newborn pup........touching expression. A beautiful poem on old age nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.

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