Monday, April 28, 2014

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Rating: 5.0

Bare foot suckled in sand
Rain water wiped out the clouds
Lightning subjugated every eye
And dreams flew like a fountain.
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sekharan pookkat
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Neela Nath Das 07 May 2014

Sensual indeed, enriched with vivid imagery and diction.Wish you a happy journey on the road of poetry!

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Hazel Durham 05 May 2014

Stunning imagery that soaks the readers mind in lines that seduce with a lush sensation! Congratulations on your 100th poem, a beautiful and sensual write!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 29 April 2014

Majestic rainy romance, very poetic and great to read. Swell job! Nice to read u again.

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Mallika Achuthan Menon 29 April 2014

Woo! This is a beautiful poem.. .. I agree with everyone here. Congratulations on your 100th poem...

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Valsa George 29 April 2014

Congratulations on your winning the first century! The rain drenched beauty seems to have conqured your mind... the wet dress seductively clinging to her body is beautifully described!

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Lydia Monet 28 April 2014

This is beautiful... You have planted a vision in my mind. Its also sensual like Poetheart says!

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Poetheart Morgan 28 April 2014

Magical Poet....delicate and sensual....I think that is how love presents itself to you....Great write....

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Geetha Jayakumar 28 April 2014

Congratulations on your 100th poem. Beautiful poem with wonderful flow of words. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing. Looking forward for your next 100 poems flowing from your pen. God Bless!

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