A lily truth herself, a soul so pure,
who gets amused just by the sight,
of humble lilies of her courtyard;
Swaying during day, smelling during night.
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Exquisite portrayal of a special relationship between a girl with physical disability and her flowers. Thanks. You've given them reasons to smile without you, they'd have been just lilies.
You're a monk of your cloister contemplating with your lilies; These simpletons are glorified by your pristine presence and your smiles........beautiful, simply beautiful........ lovely and poetic.. tha nk u dear poet. tony
Dr. Bano, this is such a heart-warming poem. It clearly shows your strong love for her. Perhaps you can send her this poem framed with her lilies. Together with your love, it will do her a world of good. Congratulations on this tribute poem being selected as Poem Of The Day! Truly well-deserved!
A great tribute to a sweet sister. Very nicely crafted poem with a smooth flow. It touches the heart with its simplicity. Congrats.10+++++++
Dear Dr. Nikhat, such a heartwarming poem of the day.... congrats for being chosen.....10+++++
An excellent poem. Well executed and written. I would not include the one cliche in this poem. It detracts from its excellence.
Tanu, is my cousin sister who lives with her parents and works as a computer programmer. Unfortunately she is suffering from an incurable disease called Muscular Dystrophy. This picture is of her little courtyard showing lily plants, which she is proud of. Every spring she sends me pictures of its first bloom and every summer she also This time I decided to pay a tribute to her zeal by writing a poem about her lilies.
Every spring with its news of its first bloom sprinkle benevolence and affection. This poem is excellently penned and readers get motivation for spring...10
Pleased I read your notes of Tanu and her disability. The joy a garden can bring is beautiful with the freshness of nature. I also like the idea of framing your words for Tanu. A wonderful poem.