Saturday, November 28, 2009

Tantrums! Comments

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Tantrums inward anger kicked in the leaves
Tell him he’s not a baby now to hold it together
But he comes running back, mums beliefs
Tell him Dad says hi and he’s not gone forever
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Sara Tehrani
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L.P. Alexanders 28 November 2009

wow i love the flow of feelings and the rhyme, very well written nice to read ur new poems

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