Saturday, December 18, 2021

Tanka ~ Why Indifferent. Comments

Rating: 5.0

hued maple leaves,
winter flourishing again,
technicolor nature.
why human remains same?
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M. Asim Nehal
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In every season the nature is adopting changes in colour, smell and look, but man alone remain the same. A thoughtful words

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Varsha M 19 December 2021

Congratulations for chosen as 489 /500 A very meaningful one. Men are indifferent because they know to overpower not cherish.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 December 2021

Greediness of humanity makes them indifferent. A poem of great insight.

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David Wood 18 December 2021

So true Asim, so true. We have polluted this planet, caused species to become extinct and kill anything that walks or swims.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 December 2021

A wonderful little poem.... just beautiful

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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