Wednesday, August 18, 2021

Tanka ~ Wait... Comments

Rating: 5.0

a still dove awaits
with patience, peace to return
which never comes back
from smog and misty shadow
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M. Asim Nehal
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Martinez Salotori 21 August 2021

All waiting.

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Michael Jack 18 August 2021

Me waiting as well. Fingers crossed.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 18 August 2021

Wait is long for everyone. Hope peace will return some day.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 August 2021

Great word on the horrors of climate change Bravo!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 August 2021

A touching and poignant poem in just minimal lines. Brilliantly presented adorned with compelling images.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 August 2021

Peace is always elusive to some.

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Juhaina Tumlu 18 August 2021

Dove, patience and peace. Loved it MAN...

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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