Wednesday, November 16, 2016

Tanka - Useless Catch Comments

Rating: ★5.0

At men's heart where your
arrow hits, Is aimless catch
only pain emerges
Neither demands are honoured
...
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M. Asim Nehal
aimless
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Michael Jack 23 January 2021

Brilliant

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Zuzu Mutairi 31 July 2020

Funny and witty poem

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S H 28 July 2020

Very funny...I enjoyed the humour 10

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Nosheen Irfan 17 November 2016

Wowww. hilarious. Enjoyed reading so much. And the graphic is icing on the cake. A super 10.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 November 2016

This poem is very wisely expressed and this is humorous. Demands are not honored and dreams are not fulfilled. Amazing really! ..10

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Unwritten Soul 16 November 2016

Maybe we dont need arrows, we need other tricks: p

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 November 2016

Facing the ways of life. Moving on; overcoming the troubles around. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

Nagpur
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