Sunday, July 26, 2020

Tanka - Unbroken Sequence Of Love ♥ Comments

Rating: 5.0

intense eye meetings
like birds chattering in spring
walk on the bay bridge
under the cluster of stars
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M. Asim Nehal
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Juhaina Tumlu 08 August 2020

Wow wow wow what more can I say about it. Awesome poem.

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Suzon Albert 05 August 2020

Indeed unbroken sequence of love...enjoyed

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Zuzu Mutairi 31 July 2020

Wow so well thought poem.Nicely worded.

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S H 26 July 2020

Fabulous poem. I liked it.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 July 2020

Like birds chattering in spring....endearing poetic expression! A beautiful Tanka.........10

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Barbara Bush 26 July 2020

Excellent Tanka it is unbroken sequence of the Real love

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Michael Jack 26 July 2020

under the cluster of stars (constellation) an unforgettable love, fantastic poem

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Hazel Durham 26 July 2020

Great poem, beautiful rhythm and a wonderful ending, the flow is stunning!

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Shreya Hacks 26 July 2020

Outstanding Tanka, i liked it very much.

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T Rajan Evol 26 July 2020

Straight to my fav.list

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T Rajan Evol 26 July 2020

Wow so well written within the limitation of Tanka 5-7-5-7-7 syllables.. Thumbs Up.

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Sharad Bhatia 26 July 2020

It is very beautiful poem about love. Thank You sir for sharing such a beautiful poem. कुछ अनकहीं बातें दिल को छू जाती हैं, बिना कुछ कह बहुत कुछ कह जाती हैं।

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