Wednesday, August 5, 2020

Tanka - Two Birds Comments

Rating: 5.0

two birds are flying
flapping and playing in flight
by tangerine sky
to reach horizon of love
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M. Asim Nehal
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 August 2020

A wonderful journey of love so beautifully crafted and depicted. The superb imagery of this write made me at close range with these lovely birds. A great Tanka.

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Suzon Albert 05 August 2020

Lovely poem. Short and sweet.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 August 2020

Flight! ! ! Journey! Flying away. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Shreya Hacks 05 August 2020

Lovely poem. Two birds playing in the air on their way to love land.

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T Rajan Evol 05 August 2020

To reach horizon of love making journey momentous...wow so wonderful

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Rajnish Manga 05 August 2020

Great imagery rejoicing the reader's mind with the fantastic flight of two love-laden birds. Thanks. Asim ji.

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M. Asim Nehal

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