Tanka ~ Together. Comments
Twilight in pale blue
Illuminating darkness
a long winter night ~
once again together
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You have defined a way to express this concept....indeed a modest love poem....5*****
Imagery that picturises sou's yearning.Brilliant creation!
Your inspired and magnificent description brings to us all the beauty of love, Excellent!
Loved the warmth you portrayed of a chilly night. Life is beautiful with the love of your life beside.
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7/23/2025 3:52:22 PM # 1.0.0
Superb return to origin.