mind far from the shore
sails on the ecstatic waves
with the ocean breeze
beneath a cluster of clouds
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It can be a great Haiku in itself mind far from the shore sails on the ecstatic waves with the ocean breeze
Calming and soothing tanka. Introspection is way to visit and revisit self.
The inner journey is the most rewarding. Another brilliant tanka, Dr. Nehal.
Thank u so much for your heartwarming comments...