now is the time
to merge in the ocean
of love and survive the waves
and grow old together
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Beautiful, fabulous, marvellous tanka! Love is the essence of life! Loved it......100! ! !
Dear Asim ji, how marvellous to see your poem as the Poem of the day. Heartiest Congratulations!
...before the leaves fall and fly...how nicely put! Congratulations!
A marvelous Tanka that captures the very essence of love. Great imagery. Congratulations for the POTD.
I love the last two lines. Thsy remind me of my parents Bravo!
Loveliest Tanka about Time, about growing old together, so sweetest Dr. M. Asim Nehal Sir. Most deserving TMPOTD.5 Stars Sir
"now is the time"