Sunday, December 12, 2021

Tanka ~ Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

now is the time
to merge in the ocean
of love and survive the waves
and grow old together
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M. Asim Nehal
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Rob Lamberton 15 January 2025

"now is the time"

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Zoyza Da Vinka 18 December 2021

Excellent Tanka.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 December 2021

Beautiful, fabulous, marvellous tanka! Love is the essence of life! Loved it......100! ! !

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 December 2021

Dear Asim ji, how marvellous to see your poem as the Poem of the day. Heartiest Congratulations!

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Mamta S 12 December 2021

Wisely thought. 💘

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me poet yeps poet 12 December 2021

TOO GOOD

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Anjandev Roy 12 December 2021

Fabulous Tanka....thank u, dear friend...

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Fred Fame 12 December 2021

Wonderfully constructed.

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Gordon Walter 12 December 2021

Congrats for POTD poem.

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Nabakishore Dash 12 December 2021

Excellent poem about Tanka time.

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Ruta Mohapatra 12 December 2021

...before the leaves fall and fly...how nicely put! Congratulations!

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Bharati Nayak 12 December 2021

Wow---Such a beautiful Tanka!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 December 2021

A marvelous Tanka that captures the very essence of love. Great imagery. Congratulations for the POTD.

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David Wood 12 December 2021

A beautiful Tanka on later life.5*

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 12 December 2021

I love the last two lines. Thsy remind me of my parents Bravo!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 December 2021

Loveliest Tanka about Time, about growing old together, so sweetest Dr. M. Asim Nehal Sir. Most deserving TMPOTD.5 Stars Sir

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