Thursday, March 21, 2019

Tanka - The Women Comments

Rating: 5.0

camouflaged with sea
the depth of the heart and head
to accommodate
all in association
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M. Asim Nehal
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Poetic Sky 25 August 2023

Outstanding one. Just superb.

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Ricky Manhatten 11 February 2021

Brilliant.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 March 2019

Th depth of heart is full of emotion. The empty cry sounds with sea. Valsa madam is right. A woman is fathomless. You have penned an amazing poem...10

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Valsa George 22 March 2019

A woman is fathomless! Her heart is deep like the ocean where waves of love and other emotions keep rising! A perceptive write, Asim!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 March 2019

A thought provoking write. What is in the mind and heart of a woman is fathomless. And their kindness is encompassing.. Another clever write.10+++++×

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Prabir Gayen 21 March 2019

camouflaged with sea the depth of the heart and head to accommodate all in association and are too empty to cry.

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M. Asim Nehal

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