Tanka: Human Mind
(Tanka consists of 31 syllables connecting to make one story
The human mind is
very complicated and
controversial
meditating to pray to
God makes our life so peaceful
© Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
Thursday 9-9-2021
I concur with your wonderful thoughts. Prayers have the power to tame and calm our mind that enable us to lead a peaceful life.
Brilliantly crafted Tanka. Very thought provoking.
Wonderful thoughts on the mind, and its greatest success, Sylvia.5 stars.
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Full stars tell about the beauty of recognition and you have rightly observed the human mind. Mediation stabilizes it God's grace makes life special and peaceful. This poem is very interesting and excellent one..